Derianly

__The Prince And The Pauper__ Mark Twain Reviewed by Derianly

A kid named Tom Canty was born into a family of beggars and thieves. Edward Tubor was a prince in Westminster. Tom went and visited Prince Edward Tubor so they can switch places. The pauper was not treated equally when they switched places. After, that the prince had a twin brother that was a king. Also the pauper wanted to become a prince,and he read books about being a prince, and he played prince with his friends before he became one. So then the prince lived with his twin brother and people did not treat them bad.

Derianly- I thought that you did a good job on your bookmark.Also I didn't get how you went to a sentence to a totaly different sentance, but geat job anyway. congradgulations! -Ashley

Derianly, Because you are new I have never seen your writing but I am amazed on how good it was! I think your first sentence is so GREAT because right at the beginning you are telling what needs to be told and it fits so beautifully!! When they switched places I bet they enjoyed some parts of being in a whole new lifestyle but other than that, they might of felt a little uncomfortable at some times! I can't wait to read the book! I really want to read __The Prince and the Pauper!__ Amazing job Derianly! -Haley

Derianly, I absoultly **LOVE** your whole synopsis! I have never read the book, but I can't wait to read it!!!!! The book sounds so good the way you put it!!! -Eden

Derianly, Your synopsis is great. you added a lot of detail. I also hope that I can read, __The Prince and the Pauper__ some time soon. I really liked how you wrote this. You did a great job! -Lilly

Derianly, Great Job:) Your synopsis is really exciting I can't wait to read the book!!! -Jane