Adam

__The Wizard of Oz__ By L. Frank Baum Reviewed by Adam

Dorothy lived with her Aunt Em and Uncle Henry in Kansas. A cyclone came by and the house landed on the Wicked Witch of the East in Oz. Dorothy was given the powerful, ruby slippers when the Witch of the East died. Dorothy needed to meet the Wizard of Oz so she could go back home. Dorothy first met the Scarecrow that wanted some brains. Then she met the Tin Woodman that wanted a heart. Last she met the Cowardly Lion that wanted some courage. In order for the Wizard of Oz to grant their wishes they had to defeat the Wicked Witch of the West. The Wicked Witch of the West wanted the ruby slippers so she could be even more powerful. Will Dorothy and her friends defeat the Wicked Witch of the West and get their wishes?

Adam, You wrote that so well. It sounds like a great, exciting, and adventurous book. I also like how you wrote, "Will Dorothy and her friends defeat the Wicked Witch of the West and get their wishes?" It is a good question and it makes the reader want to pick it up right away. Now I want to read it too! Even though I have never read the book or watched the movie, it sounds great and good job. -Lilly

Adam, You wrote that so well! You added so much wonderful detail. I love your question at the end. It really persuaded me to read the book. I have seen the movie and it was very good, but you made the book sound amazing!!!!!! Fantastic job! :) -Hilary

Adam, Great job writing your book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!My favorite character in the book is the TinMan. My favorite part of your synopsis was at the end when you said " Will Dorothy and her friends defeat the Wicked Witch of the west and get there wishes? Anyway, AWESOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. -Reid

Adam, I think you did sooo well writing this! It has so much detail and it explains everything! I have no questions at all because you explained it so well! I can't wait to read the book! I hope Dorothy and her friends will defeat the Witch of the West! Awesome job! -Haley

Adam, Great Job! It is so sad that she landed on the witch but she kind of needed it. You put in so much detail which is GREAT!! I love your question, "Will Dorothy and her friends get their wishes?" Great synopsis! -Eden

You did an awesome job!!!!! You make it sound just like the movie! :) - Saylor

Adam, I loved your synopsis it is sooo exciting it makes me want to jump into the book and find the Wizard of Oz with them. I can't wait to read the book. AMAZING job!!!!! -Jane

Hey Adam even though i have already seen the movie and read the book your synopsis made the book sound so awesome. it is so funny how the house falls on the wicked witch. great job adam Caela